Matt Bellamy

=D> That wasn't just a poem, it was a performance. I felt that. Loved the beginning and the end, though I think you lost that fast-paced rhythm with the shorter ...

I found this difficult to read when it wasn't broken up into seperate lines. Not sure about "You are what mine forever" but I liked this-there is hope!

Great description, as usual. The only thing I was unsure about was the sentences continuing into the next stanza, particularly the last time. Good work.

I agree with Brad. I would have said it myself if I'd known how. This really didn't stand out for me-like Brad said, it could have been written by anybody. ...

I wrote this with a Shakespearean sonnet in mind. A Shakespearean sonnet has three stanza consisting of four lines with a rhyming scheme of ABAB, and a rhyming couplet. The ...

Just out of interest, what would you say if it wasn't my first sonnet?

Greatness. I did indeed read this more than once. Loved "Will this knife make you listen?/If I point this gun will it make sense?" Well done.

Great imagery, etc etc...yeah, I liked it very much. Not much else to say, really. Nearly dinner time...yum, turkey! um, yeah. bye! Keep writing.

Not harsh at all, I'd much rather have a construtive comment than you just saying my work was good. And I see what you mean. Thanks loads for all your ...

I liked this, loved the tone. I wasn't completely convinced about the bits in brackets. Liked the way you ended it, the last line completed the poem and summed it ...

Ta :D

Loved it. Short but effective. I thought I'd hate it when I read the second line, but great. You're a brave writer, some people wouldn't dare write like that. It's ...

You created a great atmosphere. I liked it a lot. Particularly like the beginning and end few lines. Keep writing.

I liked the atmosphere of this poem. Good work.

T'was pretty good. Didn't blow me away, but I liked "Some girl to give up all that she has/or, by the time you get to her, all that she had". ...